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Fellow delegates and esteemed chair.
This delegate of Ukraine recommended all companies that are dedicated in exploration of natural resources come and invest in Ukraine.Ukraine contains 0.4% of the world’s land but possesses as much as 5% of the world’s fossil fuel reserves as well as plentiful supplies of other minerals and metals, which enable Ukraine to obtain the largest reserves in Europe. Furthermore, farmland is also widely available for those ambitious farm owners. Ukraine is mostly flat steppe land that is highly fertile, causing it to be known as the “Breadbasket of the Soviet Union.” Therefore, this delegate encourage foreign companies invest and join Ukraine’s resources’ exploration. Thank you.



1楼2012-09-09 22:05回复
    ……发言的话句子太长了,简单句,简单词,会好的多


    IP属地:广东来自手机贴吧2楼2012-09-09 22:25
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      你开会是面向外国人吗?面向外国人没必要用高英文啊,面对本国人更是啊……语言是大脑表达的工具就好


      IP属地:广东来自手机贴吧3楼2012-09-09 22:55
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        措辞略有不妥


        4楼2012-09-09 23:53
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          “this delegate”看着略别扭,直接写“Ukraine“试试?


          来自Android客户端6楼2012-09-10 08:18
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            英文演讲比赛类的模联,有何意义。


            IP属地:广东来自手机贴吧7楼2012-09-10 12:16
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              - -难度略大。


              来自手机贴吧8楼2012-09-10 12:45
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                太长不看


                9楼2012-09-11 17:47
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