We are sons of Chingis…NOT!
（我们是成吉思的子孙 ----- 不！）
Шүлэг:D.Delgertsetseg
We are themighty sons of Chingis…NOT!
Sitting on our backsides, thinking ourselves
New learning, as warriors, we just cannot.
This would mean actually working delves?
Mongolmales work only with the bowknot,
As sons of Chingis, look today, rare are we.
Like peacocks, we display frills and topknots,
seeking all women, drawn to us by pair or three.
Lazymales, stupid males, who simply will not
look at what Mongolia needs, that’s real men!
Lazy males, stupid males simply want to unknot
a culture of wise and duty to become dustmen.
Where areMongolia’s warriors needed today,
learning new warfare, building our schools?
Strong sober fathers, leaders in work and play,
joining the world in knowledge warrior pools!
…we seek Mongolian Warriors!
and what do we have…
Chingis sons on your backsides are total snots
you males now…are little more than whatnots
Author's Note:
As theauthor, I wish, in this poem, to express (and especially to give Mongolianyouth an understanding of) my concerns that the majority of Mongolian males aretoo egocentric and in this, they are not prepared to meet today’s challenges inthis “new world order.” Our Mongolian men are proud to be the sons of Chingis,our Khagan who once ruled half the world; yet in this day, Chingis Khan wouldturn his back on today’s Mongolian male as unworthy. As the author and as aMongolian patriot, I am trying desperately to wake the son’s of Chingis to thecoming battles that they are NOT prepared for. This author loves her Mongoliavery much and wants its men to awaken to their responsibilities and duties totheir families, their communities and their country, my Mongolia! You used Shakespears Sonnet Form and used it to write the work; where the workdemanded more of the form, the form was changed to present the work. The formdid not control the work, the work controlled theform.
from:
http://www.biirbeh.mn/index.php?sel=content&f=one&obj_id=4942
（我们是成吉思的子孙 ----- 不！）
Шүлэг:D.Delgertsetseg
We are themighty sons of Chingis…NOT!
Sitting on our backsides, thinking ourselves
New learning, as warriors, we just cannot.
This would mean actually working delves?
Mongolmales work only with the bowknot,
As sons of Chingis, look today, rare are we.
Like peacocks, we display frills and topknots,
seeking all women, drawn to us by pair or three.
Lazymales, stupid males, who simply will not
look at what Mongolia needs, that’s real men!
Lazy males, stupid males simply want to unknot
a culture of wise and duty to become dustmen.
Where areMongolia’s warriors needed today,
learning new warfare, building our schools?
Strong sober fathers, leaders in work and play,
joining the world in knowledge warrior pools!
…we seek Mongolian Warriors!
and what do we have…
Chingis sons on your backsides are total snots
you males now…are little more than whatnots
Author's Note:
As theauthor, I wish, in this poem, to express (and especially to give Mongolianyouth an understanding of) my concerns that the majority of Mongolian males aretoo egocentric and in this, they are not prepared to meet today’s challenges inthis “new world order.” Our Mongolian men are proud to be the sons of Chingis,our Khagan who once ruled half the world; yet in this day, Chingis Khan wouldturn his back on today’s Mongolian male as unworthy. As the author and as aMongolian patriot, I am trying desperately to wake the son’s of Chingis to thecoming battles that they are NOT prepared for. This author loves her Mongoliavery much and wants its men to awaken to their responsibilities and duties totheir families, their communities and their country, my Mongolia! You used Shakespears Sonnet Form and used it to write the work; where the workdemanded more of the form, the form was changed to present the work. The formdid not control the work, the work controlled theform.
from:
http://www.biirbeh.mn/index.php?sel=content&f=one&obj_id=4942
