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(目前想法设定和hf差不多,但是樱yy的对象变成了凛(倒也不是爱慕就是姐妹间妹妹对姐姐的信赖之类差不多)但是闪闪没被黑化樱直接吃也是进泥了后面变成黑闪闪和士郎对掏
剧情差不多就以争夺小圣杯(伊莉雅)士郎保护伊莉雅,为了防止伊莉雅就算活了也活不了多久所以结尾想让士郎完成第三法然后让某不知名冠位人偶师做一个新的躯体让伊莉雅变成普通的女孩子“永生”下去)各位大佬月批们能不能给点奇怪的意见或者对中间剧情给点意见什么的![](http://static.tieba.baidu.com/tb/editor/images/client/image_emoticon9.png)
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(目前想法设定和hf差不多,但是樱yy的对象变成了凛(倒也不是爱慕就是姐妹间妹妹对姐姐的信赖之类差不多)但是闪闪没被黑化樱直接吃也是进泥了后面变成黑闪闪和士郎对掏
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