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【以服之名】【原创】Smile and Say "Hi"(短/完/全英文)

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IP属地:天津1楼2016-03-02 00:26回复
    Smile and Say "Hi"
    They were both five when they first meteach other.
    He said "Hi!", smiling.
    She said "Hi!", and smiled.
    They were neighbors, grew up together, wentto the same primary school, high school and even college. Whenever she was introuble, he was always the first to stand out to protect her.
    His father was the chair leader of thepolice. He was clever, intelligent and handsome, showing great talent ininference and logical thinking. His father's identity gave him chances to showhis talent. Every time he got injured, it was she who took care of him, handlinghis wounds softly with tears.
    Their lives went on peacefully and sweetlyuntil the age of twenty.
    A series of big cases hit all the police.The victims increased more and more while the criminals became wilder andcrazier. It proved that all those crimes were organized by the same criminalgang. His father was busy. He was busy too, with minds filling with theinformation and evidence about those cases. They were so focused that theydidn't notice an eye keep watching on them.
    It suddenly occurred to him that she wastaken away by the criminal gang. He smiled painfully, leaving some paper and aletter in his room and left. He followed the messages she left secretly andfound her in a basement. After several fights with those bad criminals, he wasexhausted and seriously injured.
    He saved her. He armed her to leave thebasement. He was stabbed into the heart by her. He was dead, with a smileremaining on his face.
    She smiled when seeing him. She hugged himtightly with arms. She stabbed him. She wept in front of his body. She wasforced to do it by the leader of the criminal gang. It was her father that wasthe leader, who believed that he was a big obstacle in the whole crime plans.
    The paper he left in his room was hisinvestigation about the crime plans, which started nearly 15 years ago. That'swhy she became his neighbor. Her father watched on every action of his fatherfor 15 years. He had completely finished the investigations and found out allthe truth. With the inference and evidence he wrote down in the paper, thepolice finally solved those cases and arrested the criminal gang successfully.
    The letter was his last words for her,"I know you are a spy. Actually, it is your father who is a spy. But whenyou are in danger, whether it is fake or not, I cannot leave you alone. I'vesworn to myself that I will try my best to protect you even if the cost is mylife. "
    The next day, the police found her body inher room, with her wrist bleeding. She committed a suicide.
    In another world, she said to him,"Hi, I've come to find you."
    They both smiled.


    IP属地:天津2楼2016-03-02 00:27
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      Fin


      IP属地:天津3楼2016-03-02 00:29
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        我的妈,小幻你好腻害


        IP属地:湖北来自iPhone客户端4楼2016-03-02 07:32
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          学霸你好


          IP属地:上海来自Android客户端6楼2016-03-02 21:41
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            好赞


            IP属地:上海来自Android客户端7楼2016-03-02 21:49
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              写的很好,我居然看懂了


              IP属地:吉林来自Android客户端8楼2016-03-02 22:57
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                我的天呀!


                IP属地:湖南来自iPhone客户端9楼2016-06-11 16:24
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                  嗯,楼主你写的是啥呀?我是六年级学渣一个


                  来自Android客户端11楼2016-06-13 20:47
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                    小幻,还记得我们一起写文的日子么?迟来的道别,不知道你还能不能收到,请接受一个老朋友迟来的歉意和问候@幻想侦探flying


                    IP属地:山西来自iPhone客户端12楼2016-11-29 22:23
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