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果然翻译才是玄柳的老本行啊2333
在DA上翻serentywolf的时候看到了这个,于是打算翻一下
[讲真,要不是手机没装客户端,我真的想替EOAR那个帖更新了


IP属地:北京来自手机贴吧1楼2016-09-21 09:38回复
    这是一个有关血鸟之死的小番外。内含血腥暴力场景,好了我已经提醒过你们了。以及这证明了我的确是个糟糕的文手。:'D
    The following context is the story of how Bloodbird died. It does contain violence and some gore, so please, you have been warned. Also take into consideration that I'm a bad writer :'D
    血鸟抬头凝望着上空逐渐成型的乌云。今日将会溅血,她的皮毛与爪子都在这样提醒着她。危机正极速逼近。她凝视着地平线,在渐强的劲风中牙齿项圈轻声叮当作响。熟悉的气味充盈着她的鼻腔,那是她永远也不愿再闻见的气味。她脊背上的毛发根根竖起,利爪也本能的撕扯着地面。
    Bloodbird looked up at the grey clouds that started to form overhead. Blood was going to be spilled today, she could sense it in her pelt and paws. Danger was fast approaching. Her tooth-studded collar clinked gently in the strengthening wind as she examined the horizon. A familiar scent filled her nose. A scent she wished she'd never smell again. Her fur rose along her spine and her claws instinctively scratched at the floor.
    “灰!小小!飞鸟!”血鸟紧张的呼唤在近旁玩耍的孩子们。
    "Ash, Tiny, Bird!' Bloodbird called urgently to her kits that played nearby.
    幼小的他们跌跌撞撞的争先冲来。
    The small kits stumbled and raced over.
    “灰,飞鸟,快点!”小小是跑在最前面的那个,讽刺的是他才是个子最大的幼崽。
    "Come on Ash, come on Bird!" Tiny, ironically the biggest of the kits, ran in first.
    “小小,这不公平!我的腿本来就比你的短!”灰一边尖叫一边追赶着黑色的小猫。飞鸟紧紧的追在后面,试图抓到她的兄弟们。
    "That's not fair Tiny! I've got smaller legs than you!" Ash squealed chasing the black kit. Bird stumbled closely behind determined to catch her brothers.
    血鸟注视着他们,自豪之情自胸中涌起。他们都成长得很快,掌握了足够多的战斗技能,也能够独自捕猎——好吧,至少他们捉得住跑得慢的田鼠。
    Bloodbird gazed upon them with pride swelling in her chest. They were growing fast. They already knew many battle moves and how to catch prey- well the slow field mice at least.
    “我下面要说的东西非常重要,宝贝儿,你们听好了,”血鸟急促的说道,“我要你们现在就跑,跑得越快、越远越好。明白了吗?”
    "This is very important little ones, you must listen very carefully," Bloodbird spoke urgently,"I need you to run as fast as you can for me. Ok?"
    “嗯!”灰大声的喵道,以至于惊起了一旁的一对渡鸦,“赛跑!对吧?”
    "What!" Ash meowed loudly, causing a pair of nearby ravens to flee,"you mean a race! Right?"
    “不……不,这有点难解释……你们知道有几只坏猫要来抓咱们就行了。妈妈会想办法拦住他们,但你们必须给我跑。”
    "N-no..It's hard to explain.. You just need to know that there's some evil cats coming for us. Moma's going to try and stop them ok, but I'm going to need you to run."


    IP属地:北京来自手机贴吧3楼2016-09-21 09:42
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      刚才第一次发居然被度受秒删了
      我好方啊
      如果再删我就自行删帖


      IP属地:北京来自手机贴吧4楼2016-09-21 09:43
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        未完待续,尽力日更
        一共也不长,估计国庆之前就能发完


        IP属地:北京来自手机贴吧5楼2016-09-21 09:46
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          我试图调整一下排版……

          一下是搬运及翻译


          这是一个有关血鸟之死的小番外。内含血腥暴力场景,好了我已经提醒过你们了。以及这证明了我的确是个糟糕的文手。:'D
          The following context is the story of how Bloodbird died. It does contain violence and some gore, so please, you have been warned. Also take into consideration that I'm a bad writer :'D

          血鸟抬头凝望着上空逐渐成型的乌云。今日将会溅血,她的皮毛与爪子都在这样提醒着她。危机正极速逼近。她凝视着地平线,在渐强的劲风中牙齿项圈轻声叮当作响。熟悉的气味充盈着她的鼻腔,那是她永远也不愿再闻见的气味。她脊背上的毛发根根竖起,利爪也本能的撕扯着地面。
          Bloodbird looked up at the grey clouds that started to form overhead. Blood was going to be spilled today, she could sense it in her pelt and paws. Danger was fast approaching. Her tooth-studded collar clinked gently in the strengthening wind as she examined the horizon. A familiar scent filled her nose. A scent she wished she'd never smell again. Her fur rose along her spine and her claws instinctively scratched at the floor.

          “灰!小小!飞鸟!”血鸟紧张的呼唤在近旁玩耍的孩子们。
          "Ash, Tiny, Bird!' Bloodbird called urgently to her kits that played nearby.

          幼小的他们跌跌撞撞的争先冲来。
          The small kits stumbled and raced over.

          “灰,飞鸟,快点!”小小是跑在最前面的那个,讽刺的是他才是个子最大的幼崽。
          "Come on Ash, come on Bird!" Tiny, ironically the biggest of the kits, ran in first.

          “小小,这不公平!我的腿本来就比你的短!”灰一边尖叫一边追赶着黑色的小猫。飞鸟紧紧的追在后面,试图抓到她的兄弟们。
          "That's not fair Tiny! I've got smaller legs than you!" Ash squealed chasing the black kit. Bird stumbled closely behind determined to catch her brothers.

          血鸟注视着他们,自豪之情自胸中涌起。他们都成长得很快,掌握了足够多的战斗技能,也能够独自捕猎——好吧,至少他们捉得住跑得慢的田鼠。
          Bloodbird gazed upon them with pride swelling in her chest. They were growing fast. They already knew many battle moves and how to catch prey- well the slow field mice at least.

          “我下面要说的东西非常重要,宝贝儿,你们听好了,”血鸟急促的说道,“我要你们现在就跑,跑得越快、越远越好。明白了吗?”
          "This is very important little ones, you must listen very carefully," Bloodbird spoke urgently,"I need you to run as fast as you can for me. Ok?"

          “嗯!”灰大声的喵道,以至于惊起了一旁的一对渡鸦,“赛跑!对吧?”
          "What!" Ash meowed loudly, causing a pair of nearby ravens to flee,"you mean a race! Right?"

          “不……不,这有点难解释……你们知道有几只坏猫要来抓咱们就行了。妈妈会想办法拦住他们,但你们必须给我跑。”
          "N-no..It's hard to explain.. You just need to know that there's some evil cats coming for us. Moma's going to try and stop them ok, but I'm going to need you to run."


          IP属地:北京来自手机贴吧6楼2016-09-21 10:40
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            哇塞,lz辛苦啦


            来自Android客户端7楼2016-09-21 17:40
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              我不知道为什么度受总是吞我的回复
              我再想想办法能不能截图发过来


              IP属地:北京来自手机贴吧10楼2016-09-22 15:12
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                好棒!!玄柳加油!!


                IP属地:广东来自iPhone客户端11楼2016-09-22 20:11
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                  “可是妈,然后呢?”
                  "But moma, what then?"

                  “你们使劲跑、往远跑就好了,行吗?除非你们感应到危机确实已经过去,否则就不要停。”
                  "You just need to run as far and as fast as you can ok? Don't stop until you sense that the danger is gone."

                  “然后你再来接我们,是吧?”
                  "And then you'll come and get us right!"

                  “……,”血鸟哀愁的叹了口气,“不,你们该独立了。妈妈不能再去看你们了。”
                  "..,"Bloodbird sighed sadly,"no... Your on your own now. Moma won't be able to see you again."

                  “可是……”
                  "But-"

                  “拜托了,宝贝儿,”血鸟舐去幼崽们眼角的泪花,也忍住自己的泪水,“理解一下……”
                  "Please little ones," Bloodbird licked the tears from the kit's eyes, holding back her own,"try to understand..."

                  抬起头,她望着自远处逼近的三双眼瞳。
                  Looking up, Bloodbird spotted three pairs of eyes approaching in the distance.

                  “赶紧,你们必须出发了!”她飞快的低语着,将孩子们推上征程,“跑,使劲跑,不许回头。”
                  "Quick, you must go now!" She spoke urgently, ushering them away,"go, go and don't look back."

                  “妈,”飞鸟在她的掌中啜泣着,“我怕。我不要走。”
                  "Moma," Bird sobbed at her paws,"I'm scared, I don't wanna leave."

                  “但你得走。”血鸟揉了揉幼崽的脑袋,“别忘了要活得更勇敢更残忍一点,不过最重要的是,要坚持做你认为正确的事情。”
                  "You have to," Bloodbird placed a paw on the kitten's head,"just remember to be brave, fierce, and most of all, to do whatever you think's right."

                  “可,可是……”
                  "B-but.."

                  “这个,”血鸟费力的摘下项圈,递给吓坏了的幼崽,“给你拿着。这下你就永远留着属于我的一部分了,行了,现在,立刻、马上,跑!”
                  "Here," with some effort, BloodBird pulled her collar off over her head and passed it to the frightened kit, "take this with you, this way you'll always have a piece of me with you. Now go, hurry!"


                  IP属地:北京来自手机贴吧14楼2016-10-21 10:18
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                    这次度受居然没吞楼!


                    IP属地:北京来自手机贴吧15楼2016-10-22 00:30
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                      “好,好的……”飞鸟尖声的答应道,转身冲进了高草地,嘴里叼着那只项圈。她跑的方向和她兄弟选择的有一些偏差,但没准那会给她的未来带去些新的机会。
                      "O-ok.." Bird squeaked, turning and running off through the long grass, collar in mouth. She ran in a slightly different direction than her brothers. But maybe that gave her more of a chance.

                      血鸟转回脚步声传来的方向,摆出了防御的姿势并四下扫视。从高草的摇动中她知道有三只猫正极速逼近。她曾经也打过以一敌三的架,但牙齿项圈的微弱叮当声预示着这将是一场硬仗。这次来的不是什么普通的猫,他们是血族,就像她一样。他们学过同样的战斗动作,曾生长在同一片街区,也曾见证过同一场战火。
                      Bloodbird turned at the sound of approaching pawsteps. She moved into a defensive pose. Her eyes darted back and forth. By the way the grass twitched she could tell that there were three cats coming in fast. She had battled three cats on her own before. But the soft sound of clinking, teeth-filled collars told her it wasn't going to be an easy fight. These weren't normal cats. These were Bloodclan cats like herself. Cats that knew the same moves, cats that lived on the same streets, cats that had fought the same battles.

                      一只皮包骨的棕色公猫率先冲出高草,剩下的两只紧随其后。
                      A skinny, brown tom stalked out of the grass first, followed closely by the two others.

                      “哦我亲爱的血鸟啊,”棕色公猫笑了笑,“我已经好久没见过你这张固执的小脸儿了。”
                      "Ah my dear Bloodbird," the brown tom smiled,"it's been a while since I've seen that stubborn face of yours."

                      “鼠啮……”血鸟眯起眼睛嘶声低吼,“你果然还没放弃。”
                      "Ratbite.." Bloodbird hissed with narrowed eyes,"I see you haven't given up yet."

                      “很好,很好,我干嘛要放弃呢?你可是毁了我的一生啊,难道我不该也反过来毁掉你吗?”
                      "Now, now, why ever would I give up? You did destroy my life after all. It's only right if I destroy yours too."

                      “血族也是我的一切,是我们许多猫的一切,可我最终还是接受了时代的变迁。我没有像你一样活得宛如一只顽固的宠物猫。”
                      "Bloodclan was my life too, along with many others. But I moved on, I'm not acting like a stubborn kittypet like you."

                      “你——!”鼠啮咆哮起来,但又很快恢复了镇静,“血族失散了,这都是你的错。现在你在这儿了,可惜那些小崽子们不在。赶紧坦白他们都去哪儿了吧,嗯?”
                      "You-," Ratbite snarled but quickly returned back to a controlled state,"It was your fault Bloodclan fell. Now, I see you, but no kits. How about you tell me where they are?"


                      IP属地:北京来自手机贴吧16楼2016-10-25 00:07
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                        “闭嘴!”血鸟尖叫着扑向鼠啮,爪子探出趾缝,闪着泪光的眼睛现在喷射出怒火。她一掌撕过鼠啮的左脸,强化过的利爪毫无阻碍的割开皮肉。鼠啮的眼球划出一道血线飞离了眼眶,他痛苦的嘶吼着倒了下去,震惊的伏着,试图搞清楚电光火石间究竟发生了什么。他眨动着空洞的眼眶,鲜血聚成溪流自其中蜿蜒而下。
                        "SHUT UP!" Bloodbird screeched, lunging at Ratbite, claws outstretched. With her water filled eyes full of hate, she tore up the left side of his face. Her reinforced claws ripped effortlessly through flesh. Ratbite let out an agonising screech as his left eyeball was freed from its socket and sent flying into the air along with his blood. He collapsed in pain. Staying down in shock, slowly trying to get to grips with what had just happened. His shredded eyelid flicked rapidly, letting the scarlet river flow from his eyeless socket.

                        “怪……怪胎……”鼠啮结结巴巴的说道,脸庞被鲜血染得殷红,半个身子也粘满了冰冷潮湿的泥水,“杀了她——杀了她!”
                        "M-monster.." Ratbite stuttered with his face completely covered in red and his body covered in cold, wet mud,"kill h-her.."

                        剩下的两只血族猫从犹豫中回过神来,他们抖松皮毛眯起眼睛扑向了血鸟。
                        The two other Bloodclan cats snapped from their confusion. Fur on end, eyes narrowed, they turned on Bloodbird.

                        第一只有着黑色皮毛的猫在血鸟的背脊上狠狠咬了一口。和血鸟相比他体型庞大,他的体重压迫血鸟向侧面倒去,另一只灰毛猫在她试图挥掌抡击黑猫时咬住了她的爪子。血鸟在泥泞中扭动着设法踢开了那只巨大的黑猫,并将一只爪子戳进了灰猫的脸颊。刚一站起身她就开始了回击,拧身咬上了灰猫的胸口。这一次,她成功的将他按倒在深深的淤泥中,用后腿猛击他暴露出的脆弱腹部,品尝到了鲜血的滋味。受伤的血族猫痛呼一声挣脱了她的钳制,逃进了高草丛中,留下一地被撕扯掉的皮毛。
                        The first cat with a black pelt, bit down on Bloodbird's back. He was huge compared to her, making her fall under his weight onto her side. The other cat with a grey pelt locked his jaws onto Bloodbird's paw as she tried to swat at the black cat. Flailing around in the mud, she managed to kick off the large black cat and slam a paw into the other one's face. Though back on her paws, Bloodbird was immediately attacked again. She twisted around and managed to lock her jaws onto the grey cats chest, this time throwing him down into the deep mud. She could taste the hot tang of blood on her tongue as she held him to the ground and battered his exposed stomach with her hind legs. The weakened Bloodclan tom screeched in pain and managed to wiggle flee. With scraps of fur left behind, he fled, disappearing off into the high grass.

                        血鸟转过身,试图理清混乱的思绪。冰冷湿黏的淤泥糊在她身上,浸透她的皮毛直达皮肤。潮湿的触觉使她颤抖。她深吸了几口气,搏动的血脉为她提供着力量。
                        Bloodbird whirled around and tried to collect her thoughts for a brief moment. Her body was caked in cold, wet mud that had already started to soak through her fur and onto her skin. She shivered feeling the damp. She breathed deeply, feeling the blood pump through her veins, giving her strength.

                        “假如……你会威……胁到……孩子们……”她虚张声势的恐吓着,“那我就……杀了……你……”
                        "I-If..your a threat..t-to my kits," she huffed,"I will.. k-kill you.."


                        IP属地:北京来自手机贴吧19楼2016-11-16 00:40
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                          顶顶顶,然后飞鸟就遇到乌爪了吧,不过没想到小小他们是渡鸦的叔叔


                          IP属地:湖南来自Android客户端20楼2016-12-28 18:29
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                            鼠啮缓缓的爬起身,用仅剩的独眼注视着她,“我……会……先……结果……你的!血鸟……”
                            Ratbite was slowly raising back onto his paws, glaring at her through one good eye.."I....will....end..you Bloodbird!"

                            另一只黑毛血族猫已经扑了回来,血鸟及时做出了闪避的动作,但却没能躲过黑猫落地后扭身在她背上咬的那一口。那只体格庞大的猫将牙齿深深嵌入她的皮肉之间,强化过的利爪也狠狠地在她周身撕扯着,留下巨大的伤痕。当她奋力挣脱无果时,她感受到了黑猫皮毛下如波浪般起伏的健硕肌肉。她纵身扑向他,剧痛模糊了她的双眼,使她徒劳合上的牙齿间只剩下空气。她错过了她的目标。她继续向前倒去,迫使黑猫无法再牢固的钳制住她,甚至撞得他步履蹒跚了一瞬。血鸟在剧痛中重新站直了身体,鲜血从她周身的伤口中奔流而出,染红了纠缠在毛发上的淤泥。黑猫已经攻了回来,没有给她留下哪怕眨一眨眼的时间用来喘息,便一爪砍向她的脖子。血鸟抬起头,透过汹涌的雨水和血水,她只能将将看清黑猫的动作。她开口,吐气发力。
                            The other black Bloodclan cat lunged forward to attack again. Bloodbird dodged in time but wasn't quick enough to defend herself as he twisted around and bit down onto her back. The large cat buried his fangs as deep as he could into her flesh and started clawing deeply into her skin with his reinforced claws, causing massive gashes over her body. Bloodbird could feel his rippling muscles against her pelt as she tried to throw him off, to no avail. She span, with eyes blurred from pain, and dived at the cat. Her jaws snapped nothing but air as she missed her target. She slumped forward causing the black tom to loose his grip and tumble off her. With great pain, Bloodbird rose back up once again. Blood streamed heavily from the wounds covering her body. The mud on her pelt was now half red. The black cat lunged again, giving no time for her to blink as he aimed a blow at her neck. Bloodbird looked up, just being able to see through the rain and blood that rolled down her face. She opened her mouth and let out a short breath.

                            喀嚓!血鸟在最后关头纵身而起,一口咬中了公猫的喉咙,巨大的冲击力干脆利落的折断了他的颈骨。一声钝响过后,公猫轰然倒地,连着脊柱也被折成两节——他死了。血鸟颤抖着注视这具尸体,四周的地面上已经满是猩红的鲜血混合出的淤泥。在其中她流的血占大多数。
                            CRACK! Bloodbird dived up in the last second and caught the tom's throat in her jaws. The impact instantly snapped the cat's neck. The tom fell with a soft thump to the floor, his spine broken in two, dead. Bloodbird looked down at his body, shakily. The floor around them was now mixed with wet mud and scarlet red blood. The blood mostly being her own.

                            转瞬即逝的寂静降临。
                            A brief silence fell upon them.

                            “你——你……”鼠啮震惊得仿佛舌头也打了结,“……你……你杀了他……”
                            "Y-you.." Ratbite stuttered in shock,"..you..killed him.."

                            血鸟抬眼看向鼠啮,并眯起了眼睛。
                            Bloodbird looked up from the body at her paws to glare at Ratebite through narrowed eyes.


                            IP属地:北京来自手机贴吧21楼2017-01-10 04:02
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                              “我猜——我猜你是对的……”她从喉咙深处挤出一声咆哮,“我是个怪胎……”
                              "I g-guess..you were right.." She growled deeply,"I am a monster..."

                              棕色的血族猫向后微退了一步。鲜血仍从他脸上曾是眼球的空洞中汩汩而下。
                              The brown Bloodclan cat stood slightly taken back. Blood still poured from the hole in his face where his eye used to be.

                              “……就像——就像当年的他那——那样……”血鸟嘟囔着,脚下一趔趄栽进了泥坑之中。那些带来剧痛的伤口仍在喷射着鲜红的血泉。她试图爬起身,但沉重的淤泥使她坠回地面——她甚至已经无力抬起脚掌。之前为她提供力量的搏动血脉早已弱化得几不可觉,狂战的热血冷却后,她的耳中只剩嗡鸣。
                              "..J-just like he w-was..," Bloodbird muttered and slumped forward into the mud as her paws gave way from under her. Her wounds stung as they continued to spill out scarlet red streams of blood. She tried to get up again but found she couldn't as the wet mud, mixed with red, stuck to her fur and weighed her down. She had no strength left to lift a paw. The pulsing blood that she'd felt before, pumping through her veins, was felt no more. The adrenaline and rush of battle had left her body and the ringing of war had left her ears.

                              鼠啮踱到了她的身侧,眼前的景象让他残缺的脸上绽放出一瞬的狞笑。利爪出鞘,他一掌拍在血鸟的胸口,却只是将她翻了个身以便更清晰的欣赏她的伤势。血鸟痛苦的瞪了回去。
                              Ratbite stalked over to her side. A sudden smirk lit up his face at the sight before him. He placed an unsheathed paw onto her chest rolling her over slightly to get a clear view. Bloodbird looked on through eyes glazed in pain.

                              鼠啮更加嚣张的咧了咧嘴,在暴雨倾盆中低声喵道:“陨落了啊,浴血的小鸟儿。”
                              Ratbite's grin grew wider and he whispered over the heavy rain,"down with the bloody bird."

                              “你……知道么……”剧烈的抽息使她的话语轻不可闻,但血鸟的脸上却挂上了一抹微笑,“……我们一直都觉得——觉得你是最弱的……那个……”
                              "Y-you..know..," she choked barely audible as a small smile crept onto her own face,"..you w-were..always considered-d... the w-weak one.."

                              鼠啮愤怒的吼叫着将爪子深深刺入她的肉体,沿着脖颈的曲线缓慢的、残忍的划了下去。血鸟抽搐着从喉咙里发出一阵咯咯声便僵直了尸体。鼠啮深深的看了一眼一直以来被他看做毕生头号敌猫的对手的冷却身躯。她的喉咙断裂,毛发浸满鲜血,却仿佛在冰冷的泥土中获得了宁静的永生。
                              Ratbite snarled as he hooked his claws deeply into her flesh and slowly tore down her neck. Bloodbird made a short gurgling noise before going still. Ratbite glared down at the body he once called his greatest enemy. Even with her throat scored and blood soaked, she looked peaceful lying limp in the cold mud.

                              他用写满仇恨的独眼最后一次瞥向她,然后便头也不回的转身隐入那一片高草。他张开嘴竭力捕捉着残余的一切气味。几乎在一瞬间他就知道他接下来该追踪的是什么了。他必须加快动作,因为瓢泼大雨正在冲洗着天地间的一切。他舔去口鼻上的鲜血,踏上了他的追杀之旅,他得找到那些崽子……
                              He glanced at her one more time through an eye of hatred, before turning sharply and disappearing into the long grass. He opened his mouth to gather as many nearby scents as he could. Immediately he picked up the scent he was after. He had to hurry, the rain was washing it away. Ratbite raced off in pursuit, licking the blood off his muzzle. He had some kits to find...


                              我去!你竟然看完了这一切……#热烈鼓掌并递上饼干#
                              Holy cow. If you read all of this... *claps and hands over a cookie*

                              Art & OCs & story (c) me
                              based around the Warriors series by Erin Hunter


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