回复：3楼
谢谢你咯！可以的话，再帮我一下吧！
“在进入工作的前两年，我希望能够尽量了解各部门的基础业务办理方式，尤其是在投资部门进行投资决策，积累一定的工作经验，我也在这两年之内努力学习，为cfa资格考试提早做准备，第三到四年我将争取在所在投资部门取得部门经理的资格，开始学习与实践部门的管理与运作，同时积累一定的人脉，人际关系也是商业的一个重要部分。”

In the two years before entering the job, I want to try to understand the basis for each department, especially in business investment department investment decisions, accumulated some experience in the past two years, I have to study for the cfa within, prepare qualification exam, the early years I will try to obtain department manager in investment department of qualification, began to learn and practice of the department of management and operation, and accumulated certain connections, interpersonal relationship is an important part of the business。
我用词典翻旳= =

回复：6楼
呵呵，虽然有很多语法，但是也得谢谢你啦！