母亲节
文/勋卿（山东）
云涌，痴迷于玉兰
泥泞之上，手捧康乃馨
念您，苍生无语催醒那时的回眸
文海拾贝浅读：
老师起笔气势非凡，用“云涌”为母亲节设置了一个热闹异常的环境，为下文造势，“玉兰”是报恩的形象，用“痴迷”修饰，更突出了作者执着于对母亲的感恩之心！接着聚焦，用一个特写镜头将一位孝子的形象跃然纸上。末句揭示主旨，直抒胸臆，表达了自己一生对母亲的无限思念和对过去切齿难忘之情。构思巧妙，情深感人！
Mother's Day
Wen/Xun Qing (Shandong)
Yunyong, obsessed with magnolia
On the muddy ground, holding carnations in hand
Remembering you, the speechless world awakens the eyes of that time
Wen Hai Picking up Shells:
The teacher's writing style is extraordinary, using "Yunyong" to create a lively and unusual environment for Mother's Day, and creating momentum for the following text. "Magnolia" is the image of gratitude, decorated with "obsession", which highlights the author's persistent gratitude for his mother! Continue to focus and use a close-up shot to capture the image of a filial son on paper. The final sentence reveals the main idea, expresses one's feelings, and expresses one's endless longing for their mother and unforgettable feelings for the past. Cleverly conceived and deeply moving!
文/勋卿（山东）
云涌，痴迷于玉兰
泥泞之上，手捧康乃馨
念您，苍生无语催醒那时的回眸
文海拾贝浅读：
老师起笔气势非凡，用“云涌”为母亲节设置了一个热闹异常的环境，为下文造势，“玉兰”是报恩的形象，用“痴迷”修饰，更突出了作者执着于对母亲的感恩之心！接着聚焦，用一个特写镜头将一位孝子的形象跃然纸上。末句揭示主旨，直抒胸臆，表达了自己一生对母亲的无限思念和对过去切齿难忘之情。构思巧妙，情深感人！
Mother's Day
Wen/Xun Qing (Shandong)
Yunyong, obsessed with magnolia
On the muddy ground, holding carnations in hand
Remembering you, the speechless world awakens the eyes of that time
Wen Hai Picking up Shells:
The teacher's writing style is extraordinary, using "Yunyong" to create a lively and unusual environment for Mother's Day, and creating momentum for the following text. "Magnolia" is the image of gratitude, decorated with "obsession", which highlights the author's persistent gratitude for his mother! Continue to focus and use a close-up shot to capture the image of a filial son on paper. The final sentence reveals the main idea, expresses one's feelings, and expresses one's endless longing for their mother and unforgettable feelings for the past. Cleverly conceived and deeply moving!
